Sample of Business Website Rewriting 2

Sample of Rewritten Website Copy Done
For a Real Estate Website Creation Company

Edited by Karen Cole
Word Count: 1,500


1. http://www.site4re.com/view

This is an example of the website you can have: a website for real estate with an object's searching system and a convenient photo viewing system.

Our Two Primary Services

1. Website creation for real estate, including everything your site needs: domain name registration, web design, hosting and support.
2. Special further support: for only $214 per month you can hire a webmaster who will take care of your site and who will perform all the work related to your site.

We will create a real estate website for you and provide special support for its operation. The idea of support is to make sure that you will never need to solve any problems by yourself on your site. We will work on your behalf during the site’s creation and continue to maintain it after its completion. Simply put, we will take care of absolutely everything.

You are in the process of creating an excellent and professional business; let us create an excellent and professional website for you.

Total price to create your new website: $674

All inclusive:
- Registration of a unique domain name (web address) for your website: $10
- Unique web design development and personalization for you (logo etc.): $300
- Software needed for site and specialized real estate CMS developed by us: $150
- Special further support. Hire our webmaster: $214 monthly - 1 month is already included
- Free website hosting

Learn more about our special further support by contacting us.

2. http://www.site4re.com/view/demo

This is a demo website. It is an example of the site we can create for you.

Here you should pay attention to:
1. Real estate objects searching system. You can set as many options as you’d like. (Look below the left menu.)
2. Simple and convenient photo viewing system. You can see all the photos for the object without page uploading each time. (Click any photo of any object.)
3. Section "Hot Offers" has been designed for advertisements. You can put your best or your sponsored objects there. (Bottom of the page.)
4. Description for each object. You will be replacing the sample text with your own descriptions. There are no limits for texts, number of photos or objects. In fact, there are no limits at all.

Do not pay any attention to the web design or structure of this site - you will have your own unique design and structure of a completely personalized website.
Do not pay any attention to texts which describe objects (houses, apartments, commercial) or Rent/Sell buttons - these are all just examples.

Will your site be the same? No, it won’t. Your site will be exactly what you want, including unique web design, structure, domain name (web address), and content as well. An unlimited number of objects, photos, texts, pages and anything else you’d like can be placed on your website – there are no limits.

3. http://www.site4re.com/view/support

Our Special Support

When your website is completed we don’t give you tons of documentation telling you how to work with it, how to manage it or solve all those problems that may arise. We simply take care of everything ourselves.

Our support includes specialized technical support and handling of your website. Here is a brief list of what we will do:
• Place all necessary content on the website. You provide us with information (texts, photos etc), tell where on the website you want it to be – and we’ll place it. The only thing you need to do is give us all the information you want to put on the site. If necessary, we will even help you with this as well.
• Add new real estate objects (houses, offices, apartments etc).
• Manage all content of the website according to your preferences.
• Create / remove any number of pages, sections or anything else on the site.
• Solve all problems related to the site. We guarantee that you will have a website running, up and operating 24 hours a day, 7 days a week.
• Take care of EVERYTHING related to the website.

4. http://www.site4re.com/view/cms

Real estate website content management system (CMS):

We offer you a content management system allowing you not only to update your site quickly and easily, saving you time and money and ensuring that your site is always up-to-date, it also:

1) Has a very comfortable and useful searching system designed for a real estate website. It has all necessary options for your visitors to quickly find any objects that they want.
2) Allows your visitors to easily navigate between your real estate objects, viewing all photos by scrolling them in a special window and clicking on them to enlarge, without waiting each time for a page to update.
3) Allows you to manage all of your objects and photos very fast and simply.
4) Has a lot of useful options for you to manage your real estate objects, photos, texts, site's pages and the whole website’s content when editing.
5) Has a unique database designed for the real estate website.
6) Is a really friendly, simple, fast and smart real estate CMS, both for you to manage the site and for your visitors to use it.

It is possible to see how our CMS works and to buy it. But we also offer special support, where you do not need to ever work on your website. We can perform all of the required and requested work on your site regularly and on an ongoing, continuous basis.

5. http://www.site4re.com/view/about

About Us

Our company specializes in real estate website creation and provides special further support after website completion. You do not need to solve any problems related to your site or work with it at all. We will take care of everything that comes up, whether it’s daily work required for website maintenance or work you personally request us to perform on the site for you.

The Way to Success

We believe that in order to be the most effective and successful people should do only one job, the one they do the best. Such people are called professionals. This is why in our humble opinion people who run a business (for example real estate professionals) but who don't know anything about IT technologies shouldn't make their own websites. If you want your site to be really professional, modern and powerful, if you want it to be a successful instrument of your business but not "a website for 5 minutes" - leave your website creation to us.

We are focusing all of our creative energy, talents and efforts upon achieving the best results.

6. http://www.site4re.com/view/faq

Questions

Why do we create in particular real estate websites?

Our company has developed specialized real estate website software that is necessary for the modern real estate website. Here are two main advantages of this software for website visitors:

1) The system of photo viewing which is simple, easy and convenient in use (you are at the demo site right now at the same time – click on any photo to check the system by yourself)
2) The searching system which is very important for any real estate website and its visitors. It is a specialized real estate searching system that differs from the more common ones (check it out yourself - below the left menu).

There are also a lot of advantages for owners of our real estate website software. Learn more about our real estate website content management system (CMS).

What makes us the best?

We are focusing all of our energy and efforts on achieving the best results. We believe that in order to be successful, one should concentrate all one’s efforts in one direction. We specialize in real estate website development. That’s why we say: you run your business - let us create and take care of your website for you.

What is the idea?

Simply the following: you do not need to solve a problem called a "website". Leave it to us - we will create a real estate website for you and take care of it regularly. The only one thing you need to do is to give us all the information that you want to put on your site. Learn more about our support by contacting us.


7. One paragraph. (http://www.site4re.com/view/domain_name)

Everything written below is included in our service; we will do it ALL for you. Ten dollars is the price fixed by our ISP (Internet Service Provider), and it is taken for one domain name registration for a one year period.